Suspense is a hard discipline to master, but here are a few tips I picked up through lectures, conferences and workshops, ensuring a thrilling experience for readers.
- Give the reader a lofty viewpoint. The reader should have foresight. Let the reader see the viewpoints of both the protagonist and the antagonist. By giving the reader a ringside seat to the story’s developments, she gets to see the trouble before the protagonist does. The reader sees the lines of convergence between the protagonist and antagonist and feels the consequences of the perils ahead. Also, this technique allows the writer to place emotional weight on the reader. The tension will build from the reader’s self-imposed fears of knowing that the hero is on a collision course with disaster.
- Use time constraints. Another key way to build suspense is through the use of time. The protagonist should be working against the clock, and the clock should be working for the bad guys. In Robert Ludlum and Gayle Lynds’ The Altman Code, Covert One agent Jon Smith has only days to prove the Chinese are sending chemical weapon materials to Iraq. In Greg Iles’ 24 Hours, Will and Karen Jennings have one day to escape their captors to rescue their child from a kidnapper. Every minute you shortchange the protagonist is another notch up on the burner under the reader’s seat.
- Keep the stakes high. This doesn’t necessarily mean the story’s hook has to be about global annihilation. But the story must be about a crisis that’s devastating to the protagonist’s world, and the hero must be willing to do anything to prevent it from occurring. Therefore, the story could be about a father trying to rescue his wife and child from an impending flood, or an innocent man who’s framed for murder going on the run to establish his innocence. The crisis has to be important to ensure readers will empathize with the protagonist.
- Apply pressure. The protagonist should be working under what seems to be insurmountable odds. All his skills and strengths must be stretched to the breaking point in order to save the day. The hero should bend, but never buckle under the pressure the antagonist applies. There should be only one person left feeling helpless in the story, and that’s the reader.
- Create dilemmas. Suspense loves a dilemma. The antagonist needs to be throwing things at the protagonist that present awkward challenges or choices that will test her caliber. The choice must seemingly be a lose-lose situation for the protagonist. This may take the form of choosing to save one person while leaving another to die, picking up a gun after swearing an oath never to do so again or taking that offered drink after years of sobriety.
The antagonist, by his nature, will cross lines without a second’s thought, while fully conscious of his actions. But the protagonist is a different breed—as a hero, he can’t let innocent people die without a fight, or stray from his morals or promises. The great thing about dilemmas is that they need time to be solved, and with the pressure of time constraints, the tension can only build. So test, tease and tempt the protagonist.
- Complicate matters. Pile on the problems. Give the protagonist more things to do than he can handle. The hero has to be stretched wafer-thin. If you’ve ever seen one of those old music-hall acts where spinning plates are perched on top of flimsy bamboo poles, and there’s some poor guy running himself ragged trying to keep all the plates from crashing down, well, that’s how it should be for the protagonist. The hero should be that guy trying to keep all those plates spinning, while the antagonist is forever adding another plate to the line. By the end of the book, the protagonist should be just barely preventing everything from crashing to the ground.
- Be unpredictable. Nothing in life runs perfectly to plan for anyone. Make nothing straight- forward for the protagonist. The hero shouldn’t be able to rely on anything going right for her, and any step forward should come at a price. Also remember…
- Create a really good villain. In a mystery, the villain has to be somewhat transparent because you don’t want the reader to catch on to who she is too quickly. But in a suspense novel, the bad guy is very visible. A great villain isn’t someone who twirls a handlebar moustache and ties damsels to railway tracks. The ultimate antagonists are smart and motivated. They have to be to have created this spectacular hook that’s going to keep readers riveted to their La-Z-Boys for the length of a book. Flesh this person out. Explore the antagonist’s motivations and character. Give the reader reasons why the antagonist is who he is. The reader has to believe in and fear this person. The villain has to be a worthy opponent to our hero. Anything else won’t do.
- Create a really good hero. If the book has a great bad guy, then it’s going to need a great hero. This may be key to any story, but the suspense hero has to be someone the reader believes in and cares about. When the hero is in peril, the writer needs for the reader to hope that person will pull through.
So there you have it. Suspense writing is all about creating a pressure cooker with no relief valve in sight. You have to keep turning up the heat, using multiple burners. Employ these techniques and your reader will discover more action and adventure than they ever thought possible.
Stories that touch the soul
So were these tips helpful? See if Kaylin McFarren followed her own advice by picking up a copy of her latest romantic suspense novel: Buried Threads
Title: Buried Threads
Series: Threads Series, Book 2
Author: Kaylin McFarren
Publisher: Creative Edge Publishing LLC
Description: Rachel and Chase are back in Buried Threads, the sequel to Kaylin McFarren’s Severed Threads, and this time not only has their romance heated up but so has the danger when they are hired to find ancient Japanese Samurai swords under the sea.
Troutdale, OR—A desperate race to save Japan from a monk’s terrifying prophecy and find three ancient Samurai swords buried in the ocean’s depths sends two romantically involved treasure hunters on the quest of a lifetime in Kaylin McFarren’s Buried Threads (ISBN 9781492120469, Creative Edge Publishing LLC 2013).
Rachel Lyons and Chase Cohen, successful partners in a treasure-hunting business, are trying to sort out their feelings for one another. But neither expects the turn their business or relationship will take when they are hired to find three ancient samurai swords in the Sea of Japan.
The adventure begins when Shinzo, a clairvoyant Buddhist monk, experiences a frightening vision of Japan being completely destroyed by an enormous earthquake. To prevent the earthquake from happening, he hires Rachel and Chase to recover three stolen samurai swords belonging to a cursed prince, and they must accomplish this within four days before the next blue moon appears and the prophecy comes true.
Matters do not get easier when Chase withholds some information from Rachel that she has to find out for herself the hard way. Her partner is also completely in love with her, but Rachel’s insecurities and fear of abandonment create a wall between them. As chaos ensues and the couple find themselves on a journey through shark-infested waters, creepy caves, and haunted hidden tombs, they must learn to trust one another. And when dangerous Yakuza gang members threaten them, their love will be tested like never before.
Full of erotic suspense and wild adventures, Buried Threads, is a book readers are finding themselves buried in until the last page. Kirkus Reviews proclaims that the Threads series has “plenty at stake, erotic chemistry, dastardly villains, a lost relic, an unusual setting and a touch of the supernatural.... The full package of thrills and romance.” Suzanne Gattis of the Pacific Book Review admits, “I couldn’t put the book down because I constantly wanted to know what was going to happen next. Many of the ups and downs were not obvious, and I enjoyed the surprise as each revelation was made.” Lee Gooden of ForeWord Clarion reviews puts McFarren in good company with other popular authors, declaring, “combines the action and adventure found in a Clive Cussler novel, the plotting and romance of Danielle Steel’s books, and the erotic energy and supernatural elements of a work by Shayla Black.” And Lauren Calder of “Affaire de Coeur magazine” encourages readers to, “Dive right in; the water is full of danger, intrigue, and passion. This treasure-hunting jewel of a story will hold the reader captive to the very last page.”
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Although Kaylin wasn't born with a pen in hand like so many of her talented fellow authors, she has been actively involved in both business and personal writing projects for many years. As the director of a fine art gallery, she assisted in furthering the careers of numerous visual artists who under her guidance gained recognition through promotional opportunities and in national publications. Eager to spread her own creative wings, she has since steered her energy toward writing novels. As a result, she has earned more than a dozen literary awards and was a 2008 finalist in the prestigious RWA® Golden Heart contest.
Kaylin is a member of RWA, Rose City Romance Writers, and Willamette Writers. She received her AA in Literature at Highline Community College, which originally sparked her passion for writing. In her free time, she also enjoys giving back to the community through participation and support of various charitable and educational organizations in the Pacific Northwest.